Tuesday, May 4, 2010
Shayad Chale Gaye Woh Din…
Us raat ki chaadar par silwate toh bahut thi
Aur har ek silwat ki kahani bhi alag thi…
Roshandaan se chan kar aa rahi chaand ki chaandni
Mere saath padi bistar par alsa rahi thi…
Is lambi raat ne saamne rakhi mombatti ka astitwa chin liya tha usse
Who pighalkar mom ban chuki thi…
Ghari ki sui bhi yakinan mujhse chalawa kar rahi thi
Samay jaise tham sa gaya tha…
Table par rakhi who aadhi bhari paani ki bottle
Kisi khalipan ka ehsaas dila rahi thi…
Parde ko ched kar pahunchi who hawa bhi shayad
Mere kaanon mein kuch kahana chahti thi…
Shayad yeh karna chahti thi bayan
Ki chale gaye who din jab rang-e-mehfil hua karti thi jawan…
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very nice bahut khoob
ReplyDeleteGreat work . i wish i had this talent so that i could compose something of my own :(
ReplyDeletebut one doubt ,wats the meaning of "alsa " ??
Again a nice piece of writing with lots of innosence thats gud but wat i feel that you shud re-write it ... No doubt feel is good, somwhere its amazing i shud say like ... aadhi bhar bottal... but honestly grip is missing....
ReplyDeleteaur jaani wo din kahin nahin gaye.....
ReplyDeletethoda aaraam kar lo ... un dino ka kya he wo phir wapas aa jayenge .......
But Photo ki grip amazing he , tumse milti huyi ...:-P
ReplyDeleteNice post... However I have noticed a change in tone from optimism in your earlier posts to somewhat pessimism in your recent ones. Any particular reasons?
ReplyDeleteKeep writing.
thanx a lot for bucking me up guys...
ReplyDelete@maverick...nothing like dat...juz thot of experimenting wid my writing...:)